Thursday, June 9, 2011

Dela's Creative Writing Post 6/9/2011

Please comment on everyone's final publish/perish postings - including Dela's.

3 comments:

Dela said...

If ...decisions in life

If you want to get the best out of your life at all
you need to make high decisions and keep going, never fall.
It's all about the little things in our lifes we do.
Its about knowing the difference between false and true.

If you want to have success, it's about little acts you act on your own,
by which your character and personality is shown.
Those decisions effect you through life.
They make the difference between danger and safe.

What would you grab if you would have 60 seconds to handle,
a laptop, money a picture or is that a scandal?
These little things are meaning a lot.
Will you fail or stay on the right foot?

These are decisions that all matter,
things that make your life better.
What kind of person do you want to be?
What do you want to see when you look in the mirror and say:
"That's me?"

Kelciee(: said...

I like how you made your "if" poem rhyme, and made it "decisions in life", instead of a "how to be." I enjoyed it(:

Rachellllll :) said...

I like your poem Dela! It's great advice and totally true in life. :) I love this! <3